Spooky. Loved how the little clues/details added to the suspense and mystery. Forcing the reader to click to Step and Breathe was a cool immersion trick. The art was great too. The music choice during some of the more intense scenes (imo) was...interesting. But the slow, eventual reveal of the plot and context was concise and satisfying.
Quite the haunting VN. This shows mastery in the art of suspense. We get the general picture of what has happened pretty quickly, but the VN strings us along like our MC does with the remaining deer. The two characters’ emotions are well displayed and the writing in general is very good.
The sprites and backgrounds look great together. The illustrations are too (the ones in the ending in particular). The music fine, but I have to bring up the last one… It sounds way too silly for the situation, it was jarring.
Overall, a great VN who works perfectly as a short story like this. Great job!
(Oh, and I’m unsure about the message in binary. Seemed superfluous to me.)
This was a very interesting and dark story, I enjoyed reading it a lot. The sprites were really nice, and the use of music throughout was very effective. A very good little slice of tension and horror!
The spooky atmosphere was kinda intense, I liked slowly learning what was going on as they break down the cold case. Also yeash, the pathetic path was pretty dark
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Spooky. Loved how the little clues/details added to the suspense and mystery. Forcing the reader to click to Step and Breathe was a cool immersion trick. The art was great too. The music choice during some of the more intense scenes (imo) was...interesting. But the slow, eventual reveal of the plot and context was concise and satisfying.
Thank you for enjoying the game! I'm glad you liked it despite its... peculiarities !!!
Quite the haunting VN. This shows mastery in the art of suspense. We get the general picture of what has happened pretty quickly, but the VN strings us along like our MC does with the remaining deer. The two characters’ emotions are well displayed and the writing in general is very good.
The sprites and backgrounds look great together. The illustrations are too (the ones in the ending in particular). The music fine, but I have to bring up the last one… It sounds way too silly for the situation, it was jarring.
Overall, a great VN who works perfectly as a short story like this. Great job!
(Oh, and I’m unsure about the message in binary. Seemed superfluous to me.)
I'm glad you enjoyed my messed up VN and art!
(and yea the binary was maybe a little too much)
Dammit scribbles wants to horror me...
Why is it always scribbles?
(Joke comment)
This was a very interesting and dark story, I enjoyed reading it a lot. The sprites were really nice, and the use of music throughout was very effective. A very good little slice of tension and horror!
TYSM!!! I'm glad you enjoyed the game :)))
The spooky atmosphere was kinda intense, I liked slowly learning what was going on as they break down the cold case. Also yeash, the pathetic path was pretty dark
TYSM for playing and enjoying the game!!!
Can I ask if you meant intense in a bad way or good way?
Also do you think I should add more warnings?
i mean in a good way
Wow. This was quite twisted, but very good.
I loved it!
Glad you enjoyed my twisted mess ;)